Misty Coast – 2 Versions

Seldom are my watercolors subtle in color. Instead, they tend to be bright and rather garish. Today, I focused on a softer color while painting, meaning more delicate colors, more muted tones. The reason for this is I was driving down to the Valley for an appointment, and I was noticing the soft, hazy qualities of the air. Greens were light and delicate, flowers alongside the roads, while strong, were not a brilliant yellow. In the distance hills and mountains were soft, blurring into the distance – still clear, but very, very soft.

This motivated me to see if I could accomplish something a bit more subtle. I looked at a picture of the northern California coastline, which can be rugged and foggy, with mists rolling in and out, obscuring and revealing at any given time.

Below, is the first painting. I used a lot of water to paint with as well as dilute my colors. This makes them more pale. It seems to have worked fairly well.

To test my theory of a softer, more grey image – longer grey scale – I turned the painting into a black and white image by both desaturating the same image above, as well as removing all vibrancy.

As you can see, there are a few areas which are very dark, but there are a lot of shades of grey, most of which fall into the arena of middle values.

Below is the “revised” version of the first. Here I added some white gouache to the rocks on the lower right, helping define them and to give a sense of breaking water. I cleaned up – removed – the turquoise streak sitting in the middle of the painting. Finally, I mixed some bright yellow and gouache to add dots of color to the lower left of the painting, creating a bit more defined foreground and to break up some of the edges.

I prefer the second version. However, you will note that the values remain the same for the most part below.

To tell the truth, delicate watercolor frighten me! They require a more delicate approach to the paint and water combinations. This was really a good exercise for me and I can see some more follow up paintings along this line. They do not even need to be misty, but just perhaps more pale but still with good contrast.

Where I live, it is quite dry, so those of you who live in more wet and damp climates have more water vapor in your atmosphere than we do. You can see this when you compare watercolorists’ work from other parts of the world, such as Britain or Holland.

7 thoughts on “Misty Coast – 2 Versions”

  1. I like your first color version better. It seems softer. The brighter yellow in the second dominates the picture. For the black and white paintings, I like them both. Your talent shows in those two paintings. But, did you ask for subjective opinions?

  2. I think that any one’s opinion is valid, Anne. I like bright colors and I expect that is why I like the second. Your observations are really good, and much appreciated! Fresh eyes are always welcome!

  3. Thanks, Judy. The black and whites are the ones in color desaturated to show the values better. I do this to see if I am okay with what I painted after scanning. Sometimes I touch them up as a result.

  4. Hello.
    I love how you experimented with softer colors in your watercolor paintings! The second version with the added white gouache and bright yellow dots really brings out the details and adds depth to the painting. Keep up the great work!
    Thanks for sharing.

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