Last Wednesday, our little photo group met up to shoot a sunset. Ā The initial place we met was rather uninteresting, so we drove up the hill in search of a different spot. Ā A good decision.
We were up above the Simi Valley, and had expansive views in all directions. Ā To the north, the mountains and plains caught the rays from the setting sun. Ā To the south, the busy 101 provided light trails to contrast the twinkling of the city lights. Ā To the east, Santa Susana Pass gave light trails if the exposure was long enough. Ā To the west, the sun was setting, and spread out over the land, sculpting hills and fields, casting long shadows on rocks. Ā Where we were also had some trails, old oak trees, rocks, and fences – what this area must have looked like before the building booms of the 60s began.
I packed the Tamron 17-50mm lens, which is great for general and landscape photography, the Tamron 70-300mm, and the Kiron 30-80mm varifocal. Ā The final and only lens used was the Kiron lens, which is a manual focus lens from the 1980s. Ā All my exposures were manual, from f/stop to aperture to focus. Ā What I should have brought along was my flash – I had misplaced my remote for it, so the flash stayed at home. Ā I could have used it for lighting the foreground Ā in some shots.
Doing a total shoot without depending on any technology except my eye and what the camera says is a good exposure is stepping back in time. Ā I really enjoyed the slowness, and the fact I needed to consider so many elements. Ā In the forefront of my mind were a few major elements: Ā composition and placement of focal points and areas of interest. Ā In each frame, I tried to look at everything in the lens, moving from corner to corner, observing shadows, light spots, lines in the landscape, perspective. Ā It is not really hard to do, per se, but it is hard to do it quickly. Ā Becoming conscious of these bits and pieces eventually develops habits and trains the eye and mind; in turn, this will work in my favor as I continue this practice. Ā I can imagine this will work in quick-changing situations – having an eye to anticipate and prepare.
Above you can see the evolution of the final picture. Ā The very top one is a jpg, straight out of the camera. Ā The middle one is with some push of the color. Ā The sky was really quite lovely, and in retrospect, maybe I will go in and re-do the picture to keep that cerulean, rather than the ultramarine sky of the bottom picture.
Anyway, I couldn’t figure out why the middle picture kept bugging me, and then I looked again, and saw that the bright yellow spot in the middle tilted down, toward the right – it just wasn’t level. Ā In Lightroom, I rotated the picture ever so slightly, and was much happier. Ā In the bottom, final image, I pushed the yellows and the greens and used the gradated filter in LR, as well as used Viveza 2 to create a bit more zing in different areas. Ā I eliminated the spots (on the lens or the sensor – need to check) in the sky using Photoshop, and then Faststone and Photoscape for resizing, framing, and signature.
Compositionally, the lines and the light is what caught my eye. Ā The warmth of the sun on the slopes, along with their curvy lines was a nice contrast to the diagonals of the fore and middle ground. Ā The verticals of the weeds in the very front of the picture played nicely against curves and diagonals. Ā I think this is why the downward angle of the middle picture bugged me – the horizontal wasn’t there, and it is in the final image. Ā Instead, it is also a diagonal, and was one diagonal too many.
I am not displeased with this picture. Ā In post-processing the goal was to re-create the golden cast of the sunset on everything – that evanescent glow never stops fascinating me. Ā My hope is that the image does not look fake – but it could, depending on the monitor.
The above image is the middle one in the grouping above, straightened, and post-processed pushing the warmth of greens, yellows, and oranges. Ā Once more, sky spots removed. Ā Then framing and signature added.
And, I just realized now why having an electronic photo frame is not a bad idea! Ā Just a photo album in a different format. Ā Maybe I’ll go buy one . . .
















